Talk:Boy Oh Boy (Alexandra Stan song)/GA1

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 05:15, 9 August 2017 (UTC)

"It was digitally released on 30 June 2017 through Alexandra Stan Records, her own label, due to the singer's desire to work independently." So it didn't have a traditional release?
 * It was released like any normal single, but instead of a Warner Music or Universal Music credit, we have Alexandra Stan Records. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "Jonathan Currin from CelebMix noted,..." No link for either Currin or Celebmix; is this a valid and reputable source?
 * Currin is a journalist and critic writing for multiple websites. I have used him for various other GAs in the past, so I think is work is reliable. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "Teodora Dinu from Antena 1 found the song had a positive vibe and was "full of" energy." Antena 1 looks to be a television network, is Dinu an on-air critic or online? Also, surely more of the original quote can be used beyond just "full of"...
 * There is nothing more that we need, so I removed the quote. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "Another editor from the same website applauded the summery style and danceable rhythm of the track." Still should use this critic's name
 * Sadly, we do not have the name of the editor there. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "Currinn from CelebMix..." Earlier just one "n" in "Currin" was used...
 * Fixed that issue! Two ns was right... Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "...although noting Stan took a new direction, "She keeps to her usual style, adding flavour, texture, and progression." Different punctuation necessary after the word "direction", comma doesn't work here
 * Fixed Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "Stan first confirmed the release of an accompanying music video shot in Kuala Lumpur, Malaysia..." Link for Malaysia if it is the country's first mention
 * Fixed Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "A writer from Antena 1 found that Stan's appearance in the music video was "the hottest [...] of the year"..." Why the bridge in this quote, seems awkward
 * There are a few more words that we do not need there. Removing the bridge would be incorrect, I think. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * "Yannick Murgalé of Aficia suggested that the singer is " more sober, but always so attractive." If no article for Aficia, what is it, and is it a reliable source?
 * As for CelebMix. I have used this again a couple times in my previous work. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)


 * Nice one with this article, needs some polish and it will be ready to roll. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 05:15, 9 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for your review. I will get to it once I'm back from vacation. Best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:18, 17 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you again! I have responded to everything. Cartoon network freak (talk) 22:18, 22 August 2017 (UTC)