Talk:Boys Like You (Who Is Fancy song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 12:44, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Coming later today --Kyle Peake (talk) 12:44, 13 July 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * The studio should be cited in the parameter for it instead
 * WP:OVERLINK of Who Is Fancy in the infobox
 * "is a song recorded by American singer" → "is a song by American singer"
 * "Fancy co-wrote it with Jonathan Rotem," → "Fancy co-wrote it with J.R. Rotem,"
 * "with production from J.R. Rotem." → "while the former of the three handled production."
 * "released it as a single" → "released the song for digital download and streaming as a single" with the appropriate targets
 * "and lyrics about Fancy," → "and lyrics about Who Is Fancy,"
 * Mention the critical reception as the first sentence of the second para instead, giving that the song's title to begin the sentence though
 * "and number 26 in New Zealand," → "and number 26 on the New Zealand Singles Chart," with the target
 * Gold should not be capitalised and the target should solely be on that word instead
 * "was released a day prior to it" → "was released a day prior to the single release, featuring the trio in animation"
 * "The trio performed it" → "Who Is Fancy, Trainor and Grande performed it"
 * Add what year the performed it on the show

Background and release

 * "Jake Hagood met Meghan Trainor in Nashville" → "Jake Hagood met Trainor in Nashville" with the target
 * Target single to Single (music)
 * "Hagood wrote" → "He wrote"
 * "with Jonathan Rotem, Jason Gantt" → "with J.R. Rotem, Jason Gantt"
 * "with production from J.R. Rotem." → "with production being solely handled by Rotem."
 * "He recorded the song" → "Who Is Fancy recorded the song"
 * "with Trainor and Ariana Grande." → "with Trainor and Grande."
 * "because of Fancy's enthusiastic" → "because of Who Is Fancy's enthusiastic"
 * "during its recording." → "during the recording."
 * "Fancy announced "Boys Like You" as" → "Who Is Fancy announced "Boys Like You" as"
 * "which she also confirmed on her" → "which she subsequently confirmed on her"
 * "he announced Trainor's role as a feature" → "he announced Trainor to be featured"
 * "On November 12, Grande unveiled its artwork" → "On November 12, 2015, Grande unveiled the song's artwork"
 * Order of formats and single statement is wrong way around
 * "on November 23" → "on November 23 of that year"
 * "in the United States" → "stations in the United States"

Composition

 * Retitle to Composition and lyrics
 * "of "Boys Like You"'s chorus," → "of the chorus of "Boys Like You"," on the audio sample text
 * Sure you can't add some info about the chorus itself on the sample?
 * Wikilink doo-wop to itself and target pop to Pop music
 * "with lyrics about Fancy" → "with lyrics discussing Who Is Fancy" to avoid repetitive wording
 * "describing it as a" → "describing the track as a"
 * "charm" in which she delivers" → "charm" that sees her deliver"
 * Wikilink staccato to itself
 * "Grande's verse which includes" → "Grande's verse, which includes"
 * "The same website's Jessica Norton described" → "Also for MTV News, Jessica Norton described"
 * "and Mike Wass called it" → "and the website's Mike Wass called the song"

Reception

 * "received mixed reviews from music critics." → "was met with mixed to positive reviews from music critics." with the target
 * "jokingly remarked that it" → "jokingly remarked that the song"
 * "ranking of Grande's discography," → "ranking of Grande's songs,"
 * Italicise Vulture and target to Vulture.com per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * "where it debuted at number 34 and peaked" → "debuting at number 34 and peaking"
 * "certified Gold in the country" → "certified gold by Recorded Music NZ (RMNZ) for selling 7,500 units in the country" with the target
 * "also reached number 18 on the US" → "further reached number 18 on the US Billboard"
 * This is discouraged by WP:USCHARTS.


 * [19] can be at the end of the sentence since four refs is fine
 * "and numbers 47 and 89 on the" → "and number 47 and 89 on the"

Promotion

 * "of Fancy, Trainor and Grande." → "of Who Is Fancy, Trainor and Grande."
 * "and flirt with them" → "while flirting with them"
 * Target 21st season to Dancing with the Stars (American season 21)
 * "in which Fancy wore" → "for which Who Is Fancy wore"
 * "Trainor and then Grande." → "Trainor, and then Grande."
 * "reported that Fancy's choreographer" → "reported that Who Is Fancy's choreographer"

Credits and personnel

 * Why is there no source(s)?
 * Remove wikilink on piano
 * Target engineering to Audio engineer

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Switch the certtable so shipments figures is not listed at the bottom, since it is totally irrelevant to the article

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * after a review of this nice short article. --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:36, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, I was a little cranky during our last GAN so I apologize and good to see you back haha.--NØ 18:30, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
 * You're def on point mate, got a comment for you before this passes. --Kyle Peake (talk) 20:43, 13 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Yup, Google Play is considered reliable and I've replaced iTunes with it already. The only thing confusing for me was the suggestion that Jonathan Rotem's birth name shouldn't be used, but I removed it anyway. Cheers.--NØ 02:46, 14 July 2020 (UTC)
 * Very happy with the quick response rate from you, briefly copyedited but will now ✅. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:18, 14 July 2020 (UTC)