Talk:Boys Will Be Boys (Dua Lipa song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:52, 16 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "to unlike" "too unlike"
 * "in order to" "to" (less wordy)
 * "schoolgame" should be written as two words.
 * Add a comma after the first use of "Additionally".
 * Remove the comma after "in the chorus".
 * "kids choir" "kids' choir" or "childrens' choir" (both times)
 * Add a comma after "the first verse".
 * "have have" - typo?
 * Remove the hyphen between "amp-up".
 * "mix crafted remix" - reword
 * as "lushly orchestrated ballad" as a "lushly orchestrated ballad"
 * "songs is" "song is"
 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 21:23, 16 July 2021 (UTC)
 * thanks for the review! I have put in place all your comments. I hope everything looks okay now. Let me know if anything else needs to be addressed. LOVI  33  19:16, 18 July 2021 (UTC)