Talk:Boys and Girls (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Pedro thy master (talk · contribs) 00:42, 3 October 2012 (UTC)

Great article. Just need to address some concerns and it will be done.

That is it. Congrats on a great article, just fix or explain the issues and it'll pass. I'll give it a week. -- Pedro J. the rookie 00:42, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * This part of the article "Fischer later claimed that they talked about "shopping and shoes and our periods and sore breasts [...] haircuts and manicures and diet plans and all the things we don't gab about when the boys are in the room [and] which boys we thought were cute."[2] She ultimately concluded that they "behaved like seventh-graders."[2]". That honestly seems very trivial.
 * I cut this down so that it isn't so trivial.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * The reference that you are using for the whole cultural references section, put it at the end of each cultural reference or punctuation mark.
 * The reason I didn't do this is because I'm bundling citations towards the end, that way, I don't repeat a bunch of cites; I can just place one to cover a few sentences.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * "American legal comedy-drama television series". I would add "of the same name" at the end and link that to the show.
 * Done.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Corrected or explained myself. Thank you for review!-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)   00:49, 3 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Congrats. -- Pedro J. the rookie 02:36, 3 October 2012 (UTC)