Talk:Brad Harrison

Improving the article
Editor has [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Brad_Harrison&diff=569111828&oldid=561852597 removed the tags] from the "multiple issues" and has [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Brad_Harrison&diff=next&oldid=569111828 requested feedback] on improving the article.

I have [//en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Brad_Harrison&diff=571932696&oldid=569533433 edited] the "Early life and education" section to indicate the kinds of improvement that are still needed:


 * I have added "[citation needed]" tags to statements that have no source; see WP:V.
 * I have removed an unsourced claim that his military career was "successful". It may well have been, but without a reliable source to confirm this, the article should not say so.
 * I have removed the flowery language that he "was fortunate enough to work with" various people; see WP:TONE.
 * I have removed unnecessary links to external websites. Just because an article mentions organisation XYZ, that doesn't mean it should include a link to XYZ's home page. See this guideline.
 * I have added "[failed verification]" to a URL that seemed to be used as a source for one of the statements, but in fact leads to a page that does not mention Brad Harrison anywhere.

The rest of the article needs just as much work as this section. -- John of Reading (talk) 16:24, 7 September 2013 (UTC)