Talk:Bradley Birkenfeld/Archives/2014

Rewrite
This article is rather sloppy. I've been away from Wiki for awhile but things haven't changed. The intro is too involved and has too much information that should be in the body of the article and in fact doubles information in the article some of it contradictory. Intro should be about the subject, some particulars, what he did to make himself important and why he is important. The details are in the body of the article. Mackenzie0158 (talk) 05:02, 20 January 2014 (UTC)
 * Good work. You seem to have kept everything and made it flow more chronologically and logically but there are some redundancies towards the end.William (The Bill) Blackstone (talk) 16:57, 20 January 2014 (UTC)

Date Format
There seems to be different format for dates from paragraph to paragraph (DD/MM/YR) vs. (MM/DD/YR) and even within paragraphs. I nominate State Your Name for a cleanp!William (The Bill) Blackstone (talk) 16:57, 20 January 2014 (UTC)

Requested move

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The result of the move request was: moved. DrKiernan (talk) 19:04, 29 January 2014 (UTC)

Brad Birkenfeld → Bradley Birkenfeld – Articles refer to Birkenfeld as "Bradley Birkenfeld". Not one article I have read including the ones I have added and the ones already in the over 60 citations, calls Birkenfeld "Brad". From what I can garner from the Talk Page, the article was called "Brad Birkenfeld" as it was created by a person from the Government Accountability Project who knew him personally. She was using his nickname. This is hardly a valid reason for this page to be called Brad Birkenfeld, which is an informal name. 21:36, 18 January 2014 (UTC)William (The Bill) Blackstone (talk). 21:36, 18 January 2014 (UTC)
 * It should be Bradly. No article that I have read refers to him as Brad.Mackenzie0158 (talk) 04:57, 20 January 2014 (UTC)
 * The above discussion is preserved as an archive of a requested move. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section on this talk page or in a move review. No further edits should be made to this section.