Talk:Brainwashing: The Science of Thought Control/Archive 1

GA Review
Please see Talk:Brainwashing: The Science of Thought Control/GA1 for more information. Chris (talk) 14:48, 18 September 2009 (UTC)

Tightening lede?
I think the second sentence of the lead ("It was first published in hardcover format on December 16, 2004 by Oxford University Press, and again in paperback format on August 24, 2006") is far too detailed. How about changing it to "It was first published in 2004 by Oxford University Press" and putting the exact dates for the hardcover and paperback somewhere else in the article? Gabbe (talk) 12:18, 2 December 2009 (UTC)
 * ✅. Thanks, Cirt (talk) 14:21, 2 December 2009 (UTC)