Talk:Bramble Cay melomys/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jens Lallensack (talk · contribs) 11:39, 22 May 2019 (UTC)

Reading now! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 11:39, 22 May 2019 (UTC)


 * is an extinct species of rodent – I would add "recently", and link directly to List of recently extinct mammals.
 * Done. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * please link family, subfamily, endemic, anthropogenic climate change
 * Done the last two in the lead, the first two elsewhere. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * maybe worth adding "Australia" to the lead (or is the island part of Papua New Guinea)?
 * Done. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * and Joseph Jukes collected a holotype. – Holotypes are important for extinct animals. I would add where the holotype is stored now (British Museum of Natural History).
 * Done. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * The first paragraph of the "Distribution and ecology" does not fit under this section. To be consistent with other biology articles, I would have it under "Taxonomy" as the first section of the article.
 * Done. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * 11 species of plants have been recorded on the islands; – more than one island? Why plural?
 * That's a typo, fixed. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * the common ones included – why past tense now? Before, the vegetation was described in present tense.
 * Fixed. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * That is all! Very good, highly interesting, yet sad article. --Jens Lallensack (talk) 12:24, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * I think that's everything. Vanamonde (Talk) 15:47, 22 May 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks! Passing now, congrats! --Jens Lallensack (talk) 17:25, 22 May 2019 (UTC)