Talk:Branch Closing/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 22:04, 23 July 2012 (UTC)


 * Plot: "soon spills the beans" that might be a bit too euphemism-y
 * Fixed


 * Plot: "they celebrate their success, unsure exactly how they accomplished it." -> "they celebrate their success, believing, erroneously, that they accomplished it."
 * Fixed


 * Production: "In her blog on MySpace" -> "On her MySpace blog"
 * Fixed


 * Reception: Is there any rating/share info, or is the numbers the only thing out there?
 * All I could find was that Daily Variety link (about the original broadcast ratings) and the OfficeTally link (about the 2007 rerun). I admit that I didn't dedicate hours to finding more, as these types of searches often end in fruitless wastes of time. :/ If I find anything, I'll be sure to add it in.


 * Reception: Add a cite after the "wonderfully bookended the conflicting emotions Michael inspires." line
 * Fixed


 * Reception: The TV Without Pity grade should be in parenthesis, I think
 * Fixed

That's all I could find. Good, solid article. Images and sources check out fine. On hold for seven days.-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  22:27, 23 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for the review! I have addressed all your concerns. Are you still planning on expanding the rest of the S2 articles?  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:09, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good, I'll pass. Yeah, I am, I've just taken a break to get all The X-Files articles done (we only have, like 14 left). I'll start up real soon. ;)-- Gen. Quon   (Talk)  14:39, 24 July 2012 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I figured :) No hurry of course, I know how important TXF is to you three! You guys really are doing a fantastic job.  Ruby  2010/  2013  14:45, 24 July 2012 (UTC)