Talk:Brand X (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 17:39, 20 June 2012 (UTC)

Review

 * Lead
 * "critcs" >> "critics"
 * "the witness dies mysteriously who was due to testify against the Morley cigarette company" >> "the witness who was due to testify against the Morley cigarette company dies mysteriously"
 * "soon discover is that a new brand" >> "soon discover that a new brand"
 * "The scenes featuring the insects took up to a full day to film." >> "Those scenes took up to a full day to film."
 * Plot
 * "the life of one Dr. James Scobie" >> "the life of Dr. James Scobie"
 * "floor, his face ripped" >> "floor, with his face ripped"
 * delinked "thoracic surgery".
 * delinked "nicotine"
 * Writing
 * Reduced the image to 190px.
 * Okay
 * Filming
 * Okay
 * Broadcast and reception >> Reception
 * 11th Hour Magazine >> 11th Hour Magazine
 * "the episode's loss in direction" >> "the its loss in direction"
 * References
 * Okay

Well, i finished my review and made some minor changes. Since nothing is left to be done, i'm passing the article. — Hahc 21  00:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)

Verdict
— Hahc 21  00:55, 21 June 2012 (UTC)