Talk:Brandon Marsh (baseball)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sewageboy (talk · contribs) 18:30, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

I'll be glad to help review this page for GA status. I will begin today and hopefully get most or all of the prose review work done today. Sewageboy (talk) 18:30, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

Draft and minor leagues

 * "As a result, high-ranked prospects were assigned to alternate training sites to continue their development and await potential major league promotions." It should be noted that Marsh was among this group.
 * Added a clause of "including Marsh"

Los Angeles Angels

 * "By the end of May, he had a reputation for production in the clutch..." I see that Jeff Fletcher gives a nod to Marsh's clutch-time hitting in the OCR article, but it's only one source and a small sample size. The RISP stats should suffice and the portion about having a reputation for being clutch can be omitted (or supported with some more sources describing this reputation.)
 * Rephrased to he was batting .366, including a .932 OPS with runners in scoring position.

Philadelphia Phillies

 * Marsh has returned from his bone bruise injury, so that information can be added to the article to keep it up-to-date.
 * Added. I'm holding off on adding a few other articles until the season is over to avoid WP:RECENTISM. For instance, this article suggests Marsh is on an offensive tear, but includes a sample size of four games post-bone bruise.

I'll take a look at the references next. The prose is very good and with minimal errors -- thank you for your contributions. Sewageboy (talk) 19:10, 5 September 2022 (UTC)

Other comments

 * Image licensing checks out
 * No edit wars or instability

Everything checks out and the article is well-written with very few errors. I'll pass it once the aforementioned issues are resolved. Good job and thank you for your work on this page. Sewageboy (talk) 20:31, 5 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review. I have addressed all comments. —  Ghost River  15:15, 7 September 2022 (UTC)
 * I'll put the GA status now. Thanks again for your contributions to this article! Sewageboy (talk) 19:02, 7 September 2022 (UTC)