Talk:Brandon Tanev/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 20:11, 19 January 2022 (UTC)

Review

 * Could we add which high school he attended? It's East York Collegiate Institute per
 * —  Ghost River  19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Please WL 2013–14 NCAA Division I men's ice hockey season for 2013–14 Hockey East season.
 * —  Ghost River  19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * In the first paragraph under Winnipeg Jets, can you mention he played in three games. It currently reads like he just made his debut. This could likely be added in the contract sentence.
 * Sentence currently reads He joined the Jets for the final three games of the 2015–16 season, making his NHL debut on April 5, 2016.
 * His brother Kyle also played hockey but he is not mentioned
 * Added in the personal life section. —  Ghost River  19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * He seems to be actively promoting the importance of mental health, ,
 * . —  Ghost River  19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Have you tried getting more photos for this article?
 * I have looked hither and yon, but his frequent injuries make it hard to capture him on photo (outside of media day). —  Ghost River  19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

I've addressed everything both here and at New York Yankees appearance policy, when you have a moment. —  Ghost River  19:12, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * , passing both! Sorry for the delay! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 19:28, 25 January 2022 (UTC)
 * It's okay, glad to hear it! —  Ghost River  19:30, 25 January 2022 (UTC)