Talk:Brazil at the 2014 Winter Paralympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 18:03, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Will start review now.-- Dom497 ( talk ) 18:03, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Lead

 * "Their best performance..." - Replace with something like "The country's best performance..." or "The nation's best performance..."
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:41, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Background

 * Looks good!

Disability classification

 * See discussion here. In other words, nomination will be on hold for a couple days but will not be stopped until consensus is reached.

Alpine skiing

 * "Only the two best runs for each rider counted, and his combined time was two minutes and forty-two seconds, earning him 28th place out of 33 competitors." - Use numbers for times since it is easier to read. Also reword the end of the sentence to: "...placing 28th out of 33 competitors."
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:36, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * What was Andre Pereira's classification?
 * Classifications were not used for snowboard cross, all the standing athletes participated in one pool, without time adjustments for classification. Courcelles (talk) 18:36, 1 May 2018 (UTC)

Cross-country skiing

 * "Athletes classified LW12 had..." --> "Athletes classified as LW12 had..."
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Random comment: I never knew the Paralympics were so complicated in terms of classifications and timings.
 * Some sports are, some aren't. Cross-country is one of the more complicated.  Don't even get me started on the relays they introduced in Peyongchang...  Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "...this placed him 15th out of 21 competitors, and over 8 minutes behind the winning time of 40 minutes and 51 seconds" --> "...placing him 15th out of 21 competitors, and over 8 minutes behind the winning time of 40 minutes and 51 seconds."
 * Done. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)


 * "and Rocha was eliminated" - This is implied so it is not needed.
 * You're right. Gone.

Men's sprint

 * In the "Final" he is ranked 20th. How can be ranked 20th in the Final if he didn't qualify for it?
 * Oops, fixed. Courcelles (talk) 18:40, 1 May 2018 (UTC)