Talk:Brazilian Dreams/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 16:57, 13 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments
 * "on April 26–29" well it must have been between 26 and 29, not "on" a range of dates.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * How so? The Rambling Man (talk) 08:29, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 19:01, 19 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Infobox: why aren't the preceding and following albums notable enough for an article?
 * I wrote the article for Brazilian Dreams because it won the Latin Grammy, but if it is necessary I can write the other two articles. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)
 * If they're notable, then at the least they should be red-linked. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:11, 15 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 19:21, 15 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "decided to record an album paying tribute to Brazilian music since he has been invited by several Brazilian performers to play their music" poor grammar. Needs a copyedit.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * "and after his participation representing" seems clumsy, maybe... "D'Rivera also featured in..."
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Both MCG Jazz and Manchester Craftsmen's Guild link to the same page. Confusing.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * No need to over link items like Manchester Craftsmen's Guild.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Allmusic->AllMusic.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * " features Nazarian performing vocals in Portuguese language in a very convincing way" what? firstly bad grammar but secondly an odd thing to note.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Avoid SHOUTING in the references.
 * Fixed. Javier Espinoza (talk) 20:47, 14 August 2013 (UTC)

I'll put the nom on hold for a week or so. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:01, 14 August 2013 (UTC)