Talk:Breakdown (Mariah Carey song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:  Candy  o32  00:52, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

Infobox

 * To keep citations out of the infobox, list the recording information in the background.
 * The other, is Carey and Bone Thugs-N-Harmony gambling in a casino. --> "The other features Carey and...."

Background
"backbone. --> "backbone."
 * I would put the quote that Carey made in a box, then merge the blockquote into a prose.

Controversy

 * four new song --> four new songs
 * Alot of this information is about #1's rather than "Breakdown." Also almost all information near the end is about Greatest Hits (Mariah Carey album) which didn't even include the song.

Compostion

 * Link hip-hop and Contemporary R&B

Critical reception

 * I know you hae probalby searched all over, but making sure, could there be any expansion to the critical reception?

Chart performance

 * October 1997, however... ---> October 1997. However,
 * "My All"/"Breakdown"; however, --> Breakdown." However,

Music video

 * Just a suggestion, considering NFCC rules, is there a better scene with more involvement in which you could explain more? Also could their be just a little bit more explanation of the synopsis.

Formats & track listings

 * Need sources

Charts

 * Need linking

Good work! Fix the minor problems and I'll check back. Candy o32  21:54, 28 November 2010 (UTC)