Talk:Breaker boy/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 21:48, 5 December 2009 (UTC)

Review in progress. Others may also review. Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 21:48, 5 December 2009 (UTC)

Very nice article. Suggest possibly having more clear sections. Now it is 1 Importance of coal breaking

2 Use of breaker boys

3 Union activities

4 References

5 External links

Consider:

1 Importance of coal breaking

2 Use of breaker boys (mainly about job description)

3 Un-named section about public condemnation...

3 Union activities (minor rewrite or expansion or see if references say these activities helped end the line of work? Or maybe keep it?)

4 References

5 External links

Although it is not customary to do so, if there is a request to do so, I could do minor editing and pass it as a GA. Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 22:14, 5 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Since there hasn't been editing on it and you say it's near GA status, you can make the tweaks yourself if it's all it needs. Wizardman  Operation Big Bear 21:36, 24 January 2010 (UTC)

GA granted. Since I am rather new to creating GA (have done it) and reviewing it, others who disagree, please let me know if you disagree. I am open to learning. Suomi Finland 2009 (talk) 18:41, 18 February 2010 (UTC)