Talk:Breakin' Point (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:54, 30 March 2019 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Fine

Lead

 * Written by the band and produced by Emile Haynie → Peter Bjorn and John wrote the song and also handled additional prodution with Emile Haynie.
 * Additional production is not the same as "produced by". Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * They are both producers you can include (add) in the infobox to be more specific. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)


 * The single only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia, where it appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart. → remove, see the reason below on the charts section.
 * I really don't see why this should be removed. The song did chart on a "Bubbling Under"-type part of the Ultratip for four weeks. The only difference between this and, say, the U.S. Bubbling Under, is that the positions are unspecified. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * That's a major difference believe me. It's not the bubbling under in Belgium, the bubbling under its the "Tipparade", that's under that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:29, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Yes, it's under the Ultratip, and it counts as having charted. Pancake (talk) 13:00, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 * It charted? Where?? I see no position! MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:16, 7 April 2019 (UTC)
 * "CHARTS Ultratip Bubbling Under:	11/06/2016 / Tip / sem.: 4"

It charted as a tip. Pancake (talk) 12:04, 8 April 2019 (UTC)


 * It peaked below that, with no position, which is my main argument. If there is no peak position why make a charts table with it? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 00:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * The charts table can be removed, no problem, but that wasn't the issue. You wanted everything chart-related removed. Pancake (talk) 10:30, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I think we might be getting somewhere here. Let's remove the charts table and this type of sentences need to be re-worked "The single only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia, where it appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart. " → it didn't chart, "The single only appeared below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart", or something in this vein, what do you think? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:08, 9 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. Pancake (talk) 14:10, 12 April 2019 (UTC)

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Background
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 * Rename the section to "Background and prodution"
 * Lasse Mårtén mixed "Breakin' Point" and Henrik Jonsson mastered the recording at Masters of Audio in Stockholm → should be in the end of the first paragraph.
 * Done.
 * I will handle additional changes to this paragraph. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:35, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Composition and lyrics
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 * Instead of a picture a music sample would be more appropriate.
 * I didn't include a sample because I felt it would be unnecessary for an article this short. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * It features instrumentation provided by an electric bass, percussion, a synthesizer, and a zither. → symphonic strings, digital beats are accompanied by a slightly sorrowful whistling melody → very different from what you say, the rest is just the same.
 * I think you're missing the first citation. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * It was missing. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 12:41, 9 April 2019 (UTC)

Release and reception

 * Ingrid issued a 7-inch vinyl on 13 May 2016 → Their label, Ingrid, issued a 7-inch vinyl on 13 May 2016 (it' confusing with the studios and the label sharing the same name)
 * Well it's not really the same, the studio is called Ingrid Studios and the label is called Ingrid. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I know but it's confusing just simplified like I did and we are good. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:21, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

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 * Commercially, "Breakin' Point" only charted in the Belgian region of Wallonia; it did not enter the Ultratip chart, but debuted as an "extra tip" below the top 50 on the week of 11 June 2016. The song remained there for four weeks → remove all of this see the reason below.

Music video

 * The desert scenes where shot in Wolin National Park and additional scenes were shot nearby a river outside of Warsaw → The desert scenes where shot in Wolin National Park and additional scenes nearby a river outside of Warsaw.
 * Done.
 * Świebodzin → Świebodzin, Poland
 * If the video was shot in Poland, isn't it implied that even this is in Poland? Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * The statue could be from any other place in the other world, plus it is not a famous city like NY, London, Paris or any other. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:47, 6 April 2019 (UTC)

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 * Styx → same as previous, needs context and place
 * Done.

Formats and track listing
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 * Should add the 7-inch format
 * It's there. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Is the Promotional CD single available for purchase or is just a promo for local radios, critics and labels? If so remove it.

Credits and personnel
We are only missing this, I will take a look at the rest in the meantime.
 * Peter Bjorn and John – additional production → shouldn't they also be on the infobox as well?
 * Haynie is the producer of the song. Additional production is something else. Pancake (talk) 18:32, 5 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Done. Pancake (talk) 11:38, 18 April 2019 (UTC)

Charts
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 * If it peaked below the top 50 of the Ultratip chart, then don't include it. N/A doesn't excuse it being here.

Release history

 * Fine

Overall

 * You can now address this changes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:36, 4 April 2019 (UTC)