Talk:Breaking Out Is Hard to Do/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I will be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement: The article will be on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki ♥  311  21:39, 25 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Is there a better source available for the second sentence? IMDB should be avoided.
 * I've removed it. I think the original broadcast date can survive without a source, and guest-stars can be found on the credits for the episode.
 * Can the Matisse painting be named and wikilinked?
 * Done by another user.
 * "Chris begins a career as a rickshaw driver, and Peter becomes a sumo wrestler, but is spotted by Joe on the television shortly after." - who is spotted, Chris or Peter?
 * Clarified.
 * What is draftiginally?
 * My fault - I must have been going to type 'originally' but changed the word and forgot to delete all of it.
 * "The police helicopter pilot in Asiantown stating he pretends he is shooting at Jamie Farr and Alan Alda when firing rockets is a reference to the actors of M*A*S*H" - this sentence needs to be reworded b/c I have no idea what it means.
 * Done. I admit it was a bit confusing.
 * All done. Qst (talk) 19:08, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Great. Pass. :) Nikki  ♥  311  23:10, 28 November 2008 (UTC)