Talk:Breaking Point (Keri Hilson song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Till I Go Home (talk · contribs) 11:50, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Hi, I will review the article to have the backlog going. 3 months is a long time to wait for a review. Thanks. Till I Go Home talk  edits 11:50, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Issues

 * No disambiguation links.
 * It was written by --> Change it to "the song" etc. because of repetition.
 * The background section should be retitled to "development and inspiration" or something along that line. 'Background' is a broad term.
 * Hilson explained that she wrote the song about women's experiences --> Hilson explained that inspiration for writing the song came from women's experiences
 * The song shares its theme with "The Way You Love Me" as the they are both about "women coming to terms with what they need from a relationship". --> Uhh what? The they?
 * Hilson premiered "Breaking Point" --> "Breaking Point" premiered on...
 * Link girl-group
 * Link music critics
 * Concepcion likened it lyrical wise --> awkward prose
 * link En Vogue
 * One too many "it"s in the chart performance sub-section.
 * The video begins as she lounges in her bed --> awkward
 * Ref. 34 --> publisher is also Google.
 * Perhaps you could add an image to the article?
 * Has she performed it live?
 * Yes, but only minor concerts that reliable sources don't cover. Pancake (talk) 13:12, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Overall

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * There aren't really any major issues in the article.
 * All issues have been addressed. I'm passing the article — Till I Go Home talk  edits 13:29, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * There aren't really any major issues in the article.
 * All issues have been addressed. I'm passing the article — Till I Go Home talk  edits 13:29, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. I'm passing the article — Till I Go Home talk  edits 13:29, 2 June 2012 (UTC)