Talk:Breanna Stewart/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: EricEnfermero (talk · contribs) 08:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)

I was happy to take a look at this article, but I notice pretty significant issues with prose. Most seriously, I removed a paragraph that appeared to be taken verbatim from the bio on her college team website. In addition to copyediting, the article needs to be thoroughly evaluated for other copyright issues. I will detail a bit more below. EricEnfermero (Talk) 08:58, 25 March 2015 (UTC)

The major issues
It seems that the nominator of this article has been inactive for some time. There are significant issues that won't be easily resolved within a few days, even if someone else were to pick up responsibility for addressing this review feedback. Here are the major issues that I noticed on a brief review; a full review isn't indicated right now.


 * A copyright violation was removed from the Sophomore Year section.
 * The lead is incomplete, with no college info other than the name of her school and that she enrolled in 2012.
 * Grammar is inconsistent - a copyedit may help a great deal. I can provide examples if they would help someone.
 * An inline source should appear after direct quotes.
 * Some 2014-2015 information can probably be included by now.


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

This can be renominated at any point if someone would like to pick it up. EricEnfermero (Talk) 09:21, 25 March 2015 (UTC)