Talk:Breathing (Jason Derulo song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 19:49, 16 June 2012 (UTC)

Infobox

 * Provide an ALT text for the cover. ✅

Lead

 * was well received → garnered positive reviews ✅

Background and release

 * You can link DJ Frank E as it is the first time he is mentioned in the body of prose. ✅
 * Link synth ✅
 * and three remixes of "Breathing" → Because of how you have constructed this sentence, you need a comma after "Breathing" ✅

Composition

 * According to the digital sheet music published at Musicnotes.com by Universal Music Publishing Group, → Not needed, remove. ✅
 * and contains elements of the song "Pilentze Pee", → In the lead you say sample. ✅
 * As quite a lot of this section is about the lyrics, I'd change this section to "Composition and lyrics". ✅

Critical reception

 * This is full of quotes. Can you paraphrase some? I'd try the quote - paraphrased quote - quote method lol. ✅

Chart performance

 * eventually certified → Remove "eventually" ✅

Music video

 * No issues.

Live performances and cover versions

 * No issues.

Track listing

 * I'd change this to "Formats and track listings" as there are different formats in which it was available. ✅

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts and certifications

 * The Weekly Charts table isn't weekly if you include two different years, that yearly. Also, 2011 peaks should be on one table, 2012 peaks in the other table. ✅

Release history

 * I did a slight c/e of the tables.
 * Could you add a Label column too. ✅

Summary
Quite impressed! References are practically perfect. Article is really well written. Good job! On hold
 * Passing, well done :) Aaron  &bull; You  Da  One 13:32, 19 June 2012 (UTC)