Talk:Brentwood Academy v. Tennessee Secondary School Athletic Ass'n/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Racepacket (talk) 23:09, 11 March 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I believe I have addressed all concerns/comments raised above. Please tell me if anything else needs to be changed/altered/added. I appreciate your assistance in helping me to improve the article. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 23:21, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
 * What about amici?
 * Explain the § 1983 claim and the "state action" test applied to both 1983 and 14 amendment claims. Racepacket (talk) 03:22, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * I believe I have addressed all concerns/comments raised above. Please tell me if anything else needs to be changed/altered/added. I appreciate your assistance in helping me to improve the article. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 23:21, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
 * What about amici?
 * Explain the § 1983 claim and the "state action" test applied to both 1983 and 14 amendment claims. Racepacket (talk) 03:22, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I believe I have addressed all concerns/comments raised above. Please tell me if anything else needs to be changed/altered/added. I appreciate your assistance in helping me to improve the article. Regards, Lord Roem (talk) 23:21, 12 March 2011 (UTC)
 * What about amici?
 * Explain the § 1983 claim and the "state action" test applied to both 1983 and 14 amendment claims. Racepacket (talk) 03:22, 13 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Explain the § 1983 claim and the "state action" test applied to both 1983 and 14 amendment claims. Racepacket (talk) 03:22, 13 March 2011 (UTC)

March 13 reading
The nominator has not participated in Wikipedia since March 13, the date of my follow up comments. I have reached out to him without a response, so I am respectfully failing the article, with the hope that he comes back, considers the concerns noted, and renominates after revising the article. I am sorry that it did not work out. Racepacket (talk) 18:05, 2 April 2011 (UTC)
 * "became important in civil suit jurisprudence." - should this be civil rights jurisprudence?
 * "their Due Process rights" - why capitalize?
 * "there were no hearings to determine the validity of the claim that they inappropriately recruited football players." - was the argument that there must be an evidentiary hearing or just a paper hearing?
 * Can we add cites to the district court, two Court of Appeals decisions and the second Supreme Court decision? (Tennessee Secondary School Athletic Assn. v. Brentwood Academy, 551 U.S. 291)