Talk:Brian Monaco

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Some proposed changes
Information to be added or removed:

The lead paragraph to be written as

''Brian J. Monaco is the President and Global Chief Marketing Officer of Sony/ATV Music Publishing. He is an American music executive who was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players for three consecutive years.''

The Career section has some promotional content that should be removed and the proposed revision to be as

''Monaco graduated from the University of Dayton in 1994 and founded Worldwide Talent Group (WTG), a talent management company that represents authors, politicians and media personalities.He started the college tours of MTV’s The Real World/Road Rules cast which played over 500 tour dates. In 2007, Monaco sold Worldwide Talent Group and became Executive Vice President, Worldwide Head of Advertising, Film & TV for both EMI Music Publishing and EMI Records. In 2012, EMI Music Publishing was acquired by a consortium led by Sony. In July 2012, Monaco joined Sony/ATV Music Publishing as Executive Vice President, Commercial Music Group following the acquisition of EMI Music Publishing. He helped Pharrell Williams sign a deal with Sony/ATV Music. He hosts a proprietary sync camp twice a year for songwriters. In 2017 and 2018, he was one of the jury member on Clio Music. He is a voting member of the Rock & Roll Hall of Fame and the Songwriters Hall of Fame''.

The Recognition section revised with the new addition of information

''In 2016, 2017 and 2018 Monaco was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players. Monaco was featured on the Variety New Power of New York list for 2018. ''

To address the issue in the 'Categories section', I can add additional categories such as American people, University of Dayton, Music companies in America.

Explanation of issue: All changes are made to address the issues mentioned at the top of the article page.

References supporting change: https://www.nytimes.com/2018/10/14/business/media/need-a-song-for-your-commercial-try-these-campers.html https://www.billboard.com/articles/business/6843774/brian-monaco-interview-sonyatv-publishing-advertising-film-tv https://www.musicbusinessworldwide.com/sonyatv-promotes-brian-monaco-president-global-chief-marketing-officer/ http://www.hollywood.com/general/pharrell-williams-to-mentor-songwriters-after-signing-new-sonyatv-deal-60717922/ https://www.rollingstone.com/music/music-news/why-musicians-are-working-with-brands-to-promote-their-music-to-the-masses-666852/ https://variety.com/gallery/2018-new-power-of-new-york-list/#!50/brian-monaco-credit-is-courtesy-of-sony-atv-music-publishing Basevoter (talk) 17:55, 20 December 2018 (UTC)

Reply 20-DEC-2018
Your edit request could not be reviewed because it is unclear which references are connected to which claim statements in the text of your proposal. When proposing edit requests, it is important to highlight in the text which specific sources are doing the referencing for each claim. The point of an inline citation is to allow the reviewer and readers to check that the material is sourced; that point is lost if the citation's note number is not clearly placed. Note the example below:

 The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles, while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles. The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.

References

1. Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2018, p. 1. 2. Duvalier, Gabrielle. "Size of the Moon", Scientific American, 51(78):46. 3. Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2018, p. 2.

In the example above there are three references provided, but the claim statements do not indicate which reference applies where. Your edit request similarly does not specify where the references you have provided are to be placed. These links between material and their source references must be more clearly made, as shown in the next example below:

✅ The Sun's diameter is 864,337.3 miles,[1] while the Moon's diameter is 2,159 miles.[2] The Sun's temperature is 5,778 degrees Kelvin.[3]

References

^ Sjöblad, Tristan. The Sun. Academic Press, 2018, p. 1. ^ Duvalier, Gabrielle. "Size of the Moon", Scientific American, 51(78):46. ^ Uemura, Shū. The Sun's Heat. Academic Press, 2018, p. 2. 

In the example above, the links between the provided references and their claim statements are perfectly clear. Kindly reformulate your edit request so that it aligns more with the second example above, and feel free to re-submit that edit request at your earliest convenience. Regards,  Spintendo   18:14, 20 December 2018 (UTC)

Some proposed changes
Information to be added or removed:

Brian J. Monaco is the President and Global Chief Marketing Officer of Sony/ATV Music Publishing. [1] He is an American music executive who was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players for three consecutive years.

Monaco graduated from the University of Dayton in 1994 and founded Worldwide Talent Group (WTG), a talent management company that represents authors, politicians and media personalities. He started the college tours of MTV’s The Real World/Road Rules cast which played over 500 tour dates. [3][4][5]
 * Career

In 2007, Monaco sold Worldwide Talent Group and became Executive Vice President, Worldwide Head of Advertising, Film & TV for both EMI Music Publishing and EMI Records. [6]

In 2012, EMI Music Publishing was acquired by a consortium led by Sony. In July 2012, Monaco joined Sony/ATV Music Publishing as Executive Vice President, Commercial Music Group following the acquisition of EMI Music Publishing.[7][8] He helped Pharrell Williams sign a deal with Sony/ATV Music. He hosts a proprietary sync camp twice a year for songwriters. In 2017 and 2018, he was one of the jury member on Clio Music. [12] [13] He is a voting member of the Rock & Roll Hall of Fame and the Songwriters Hall of Fame.


 * Recognition
 * In 2016, 2017 and 2018 Monaco was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players. [9][10][11]
 * Monaco was featured on the Variety New Power of New York list for 2018.

Explanation of issue: I would like to propose these changes in order to remove the page issues. I am paid by Lois ONeill to do so. I have removed the promotional content and have written in a factual manner. Along with the existing references, I have proposed the addition of more reliable references. Please let me know if this works. Thank you.

References supporting change: Added in the proposed text.

66.160.201.97 (talk) 11:23, 2 January 2019 (UTC)

Reply 02-JAN-2019
Once these issues are corrected, please feel free to resubmit the edit request at your earliest convenience. Regards,  Spintendo   12:47, 2 January 2019 (UTC)
 * The edit request remains unable to be reviewed because of the following:
 * 1) Not all of the ref tags in the proposed text are connected to the listed sources in the references. In many instances, instead of ref tags, there are numbers placed within brackets (e.g., [1],[2], etc). These bracketed numbers are not linked to any reference. The sources represented by these bracketed numbers are therefore unable to be viewed for verification.
 * 2) The COI editor has not made the required disclosures regarding the nature of their conflict of interest.

Some proposed changes
Information to be added or removed:

Brian J. Monaco is the President and Global Chief Marketing Officer of Sony/ATV Music Publishing. He is an American music executive who was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players for three consecutive years.

Career
Monaco graduated from the University of Dayton in 1994 and founded Worldwide Talent Group (WTG), a talent management company that represents authors, politicians and media personalities. He started the college tours of MTV’s The Real World/Road Rules cast which played over 500 tour dates.

In 2007, Monaco sold Worldwide Talent Group and became Executive Vice President, Worldwide Head of Advertising, Film & TV for both EMI Music Publishing and EMI Records.

In 2012, EMI Music Publishing was acquired by a consortium led by Sony. In July 2012, Monaco joined Sony/ATV Music Publishing as Executive Vice President, Commercial Music Group following the acquisition of EMI Music Publishing. He helped Pharrell Williams sign a deal with Sony/ATV Music. He hosts a proprietary sync camp twice a year for songwriters.

In 2017 and 2018, he was one of the jury member on Clio Music. He is a voting member of the Rock & Roll Hall of Fame and the Songwriters Hall of Fame.

Recognition

 * In 2016, 2017 and 2018 Monaco was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players.
 * Monaco was featured on the Variety New Power of New York list for 2018.

Explanation of issue: I would like to propose these changes in order to remove the page issues. I am paid by Lois ONeill to do so. I have removed the promotional content and have written in a factual manner. Along with the existing references, I have proposed the addition of more reliable references. Please let me know if this works. Thank you.

References supporting change: Added in the proposed text.

I have addressed all issues in this edit request Spintendo. I hope it is good this time. 66.160.178.80 (talk) 09:57, 4 January 2019 (UTC)

Reply 04-JAN-2019
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Some proposed changes
Hi Spintendo, here is a response to your request for references for unreferenced or vague claims. Information to be added or removed:

1. Monaco was recognized as one of Billboard’s Branding Power Players for 2016, 2017 and 2018.

2. Monaco graduated from the University of Dayton in 1994.

3. He founded the college tours of MTV’s The Real World/Road Rules cast which played over 500 tour dates.

4. In 2012, EMI Music Publishing was acquired by a consortium led by Sony.

5. He convinced Pharrell Williams to extend his deal with Sony/ATV Music.

6. In 2017 and 2018, he was one of the jury member on Clio Music. He is a voting member of the Rock & Roll Hall of Fame and the Songwriters Hall of Fame. Explanation:

Clio Music Judge Each year, Clio appoints top creatives and marketers from around the world to serve on our distinct juries. Clio selects individuals whose own creative work epitomizes the best of their respective fields, ensuring that each juror has an in-depth understanding of the industry’s evolving marketplace. The Clio judging process is known for its diplomatic approach to recognizing creative excellence. All jurors have an equal say in decisions, and the majority vote rules. Juries will review all of the entries submitted within their respected medium type. After narrowing down the entries in the first two rounds, the jury will reconvene for the final round to discuss, debate and ultimately award statues. A jury does not have to award a statue or a shortlist in any of the mediums and categories. They have the option to award as many entries, or as few, as they see fit. The jury has the option to award an entry Shortlist, Bronze, Silver and Gold. Each jury also has the option of awarding Clio’s highest honor, the Grand Clio. A Grand Clio is reserved for a submission that is considered by the jury to be far and away the most innovative and may ultimately drive the creative direction of the industry moving forward.

Songwriters Hall of Fame To qualify for Voting Membership, you must be a member of a Performing Rights Organization or be employed as a music industry professional. If you are affiliated with ASCAP, BMI or SESAC, you are required to provide your IPI/CAE number, which can be found when you search your name on your PRO's writers' database. Music industry professionals are required to provide company name and title/position information.If you are not affiliated with a Performing Rights Organization, join now at any level. If you are a music industry professional and wish to vote, you must provide company name and title/position information.

7. Monaco was featured on the Variety New Power of New York list for 2018.

Explanation of issue: Please remove the tags from the top of the page if you feel the I have addressed the issues. Thank you.

References supporting change: Added with the sentences

66.160.178.70 (talk) 11:27, 8 January 2019 (UTC)

Reply 10-JAN-2019
Below you will see where proposals from your request have been quoted with reviewer decisions and feedback inserted underneath, either accepting, declining or otherwise commenting upon your proposal(s). Please read the enclosed notes within the proposal review section below for information on each request. Also note that because the IP editor disclosed their payments, the UDP template has been removed.  Spintendo   12:26, 10 January 2019 (UTC)