Talk:Brian Platt

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for your work. I'm marking it as reviewed (with wp:notability being a main review question) because suitable sources exist including at least one in the article. However, the wording needs a lot of work to make it an encyclopedic article. Right now most of the article reads like bullet points on a resume. Happy editing!

North8000 (talk) 20:28, 6 November 2023 (UTC)