Talk:Brian the Bachelor/GA1

GA Review
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Hello. I will be doing the GA review for this article. Here are some suggestions for improvement: That's it. The article will remain on hold for seven days to allow for improvements. Nikki ♥  311  21:09, 23 November 2008 (UTC)
 * In the text, a lot of the refs need to be placed in numerical order.
 * Done. – Ms. Sarita  Confer  04:55, 24 November 2008 (UTC)
 * "The scene at the dermatology clinic with Doug the pimple trying to drag Chris across the room to grab a gun and then Chris stabbing it with a needle first could be a reference to "Evil Dead II" when Ash Williams is being dragged across the cabin by his demon-possessed hand which is trying to get a meat cleaver but instead Ash stabs his hand and cuts it off before it reaches the cleaver." - this needs a reference or it is original research.
 * That wasn't in the article when it was nominated, but because my editing has been sporadic for a few weeks, I haven't been on hand to remove it. Qst (talk) 19:19, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Is there a more reliable source for the director and writer information? Maybe the show's official website or the DVDs?
 * Everything else is done. Cheers Nikki. :) Qst (talk) 19:19, 27 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Great. Pass. :) Nikki  ♥  311  23:14, 28 November 2008 (UTC)