Talk:Bridget Moynahan/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: HJ Mitchell  |  Penny for your thoughts?   12:08, 9 March 2010 (UTC) I'll be back later on to make some comments! HJ Mitchell |  Penny for your thoughts?   12:08, 9 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Checklinks throws up a few supposedly problem external links but, clicking on them, all work so that doesn't concern me.


 * I'm happy this meets the criteria and I've given it a copyedit for you, so it'll be a nice, easy pass. A few suggestions for taking it further:
 * Prose quality- I've given it a quick copyedit but it could use a little more attention- a lot of sentences start with "In [year]..." or "Moynanhan..."
 * I think I made a consistency. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  19:33, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * For purposes of readability, I'd suggest splitting the career section into two or even 3 sections and/or subsections
 * That's what I thought of doing too, but never knew where to split it from. Update: Alright, I did a test, not sure.
 * I have reservations about whether the image qualifies as fair use under the NFCC, especially since the subject is living. A Flickr trawl might produce something that can be used or some whose authors could be persuaded to release them.
 * Wow, I feel so dumb for not checking the image out. Anyways, I've removed the image, as it fails NFCC. Also, I did a check on Flickr and there aren't any free images available, but I'll keep looking.

Once the other issues have been addressed, I hope you'll put it up for peer review and even FAC and I'll be happy to give a more thorough copyedit if you need it. HJ Mitchell |  Penny for your thoughts?   19:12, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, HJ, I appreciate it. :) Yeah, maybe in the future I'll take this article to a PR. Anyways, thanks again. -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  19:33, 9 March 2010 (UTC)
 * You're quite welcome. Let me know how things go in the future. I think there's potentially a future FA here. HJ Mitchell  |  Penny for your thoughts?   19:39, 9 March 2010 (UTC)