Talk:Briggsdale (Columbus, Ohio)

=Peer Review Comments=

-Good information on the history. It's very detailed.

-The locations of the neighborhood might fit better under a Geography section.

-In the history section, not sure if I understand when you say "16 years his junior."

-Under the Briggsdale Methodist Church, cite the references for all of the dates you researched.

-What is the significance of the Briggsdale School?

Users: Kristiana Burgi and Andrew Love — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:304:CDD9:9090:4598:1F6E:41C:DD9A (talk) 04:02, 5 December 2014 (UTC)

=Instructor Comments No. 1=


 * Good Start
 * I agree with Lisa, too much commentary on Family, but some of the information is useful.
 * It is never mentioned that Briggsdale was named by Briggs - need to mention that.
 * What is the Geography of Briggsdale? Boundaries? What neighborhoods are nearby?
 * On Geography: I believe there is a more formalized historical boundary, but are there nearby businesses/churches with Briggsdale in the title? This would suggest larger commonly interpreted boundaries.
 * Is there any signage?
 * WorldCat@OSU Lists several City Directories that have various names in them of residents and businesses. May want to look at these for some more information.
 * Briggsdale Apartments info is useful, but it needs to be under a residential subhead.
 * Was there a Briggsdale Railroad Station on the Columbus and Xenia railroad?

Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:42, 18 November 2014 (UTC)

=Instructor Comments No. 2=

Well-written

 * Lead Section Needs Work
 * Haven't updated it with current feedback
 * Add Geography Section

Verifiable with no original research

 * Good work here

Broad in its coverage

 * Well done.

Neutral

 * Be careful here, Example: Joseph M. Briggs was one of the most prominent and influential citizens of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio. It should read: Joseph M. Briggs was a prominent and influential citizen of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio By doing this you remove the opinion from it (passive vs. active voice).

Stable

 * No comments yet.

Illustrated

 * No Images, and it needs them.
 * Also, see if you can add an info box.