Talk:Brimington Junior School

Victuallers 18:05, 3 March 2007 (UTC)

Unsuitable tense tag
This article suffers from being written as a recollection, written in a past tense unsuitable for an encyclopedia. In particular, sentences such as "Its current headmaster was or still is Mr. Brian Dumbar" are not appropriate, as they create doubt. Bob talk 09:17, 23 October 2006 (UTC)

Agreed this is a good length but somtimes wanders into less interesting areas. Go on Bob .... see if you can do better ..Victuallers 18:05, 3 March 2007 (UTC)