Talk:Bristol Customshouse and Post Office/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

This one looks interesting, I'll pick it up next. Comments ideally later today. Wizardman 15:11, 9 August 2014 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * The first paragraph of the lead feels a but hard to read due to overuse of the word and (i'm seeing about twice per sentence). Try and trim that down.
 * "It was completed in 1858, from the design by Ammi B. Young, the Bristol Customshouse and Post Office is a two-story rectangular Italian palazzo style brick building that rests upon a raised granite base" I feel like it's missing a word or a sentence break somewhere. Also remove the first comma.
 * "The front facade is made of deep red brick that is has three large" rm is.
 * "which shows pedimented dormer in the" dormers; linking might help for that phrase as well.

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 00:08, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
 * I can hold it for a bit longer, but since it's a quick fix I'd rather not keep it indefinitely. Wizardman  23:12, 18 August 2014 (UTC)

Since the writer's on wikibreak, I just went and fixed the issues myself; article passes. Wizardman 22:37, 28 August 2014 (UTC)