Talk:British Empire Building/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 03:11, 26 June 2022 (UTC)


 * "The building's entrances contain ornate decorations by Lee Lawrie, Carl Paul Jennewein, and Rene Paul Chambellan" - body indicates that Chambellan did the windows, not the entrances?
 * Infobox is the only reference to "Associated Architects"
 * "The west elevation rises seven stories and includes display windows," - infobox says the whole building is six floors tall?
 * "The project ultimately gained the support of John D. Rockefeller Jr." - no need to link Rockefeller Jr for the second time in one paragraph
 * The mentions of Art Deco aren't well established - uncited mentions in the lead, infobox, and a category but nothing I noticed in the main body
 * "The plans were approved that April." - any update on this? I'm assuming it got pandemic delayed
 * image licensing looks fine
 * Did some source-text integrity checks on Adams 1985, no issues noted

Hog Farm Talk 01:55, 28 June 2022 (UTC)
 * @Hog Farm, thanks for the review. I have addressed all of these issues, except for the info about the 2020 renovation. I assume it was delayed by the pandemic but I can't find sources saying so for sure. – Epicgenius (talk) 15:22, 29 June 2022 (UTC)