Talk:Brix Tavern/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gerald Waldo Luis (talk · contribs) 04:50, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Will review this article.  Gerald WL  04:50, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Menu

 * "with maple sausage, Eggs Benedict, shrimp and grits, mimosas..." Mimosa the flower? Um....  Gerald WL  04:53, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:27, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "Thursdays it offers a three-course meal plus cocktail for $30..." Maybe "[On] Thursdays it offers a three-course meal plus cocktail for $30"?  Gerald WL  04:57, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Events

 * "For Nacho Week ... for $5" Maybe add an "as well" at the end?  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:28, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Assuming it refers to the 2020 Super Bowl, maybe link "2020" to Super Bowl LV?  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Linked to Super Bowl LIV --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:29, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Link tater tots?  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , The phrase is linked before the parenthesis. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:30, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Reception

 * Link brownie?  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:30, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Second sentence has ref. 6 and 25. Ref. 6 has been used on previous sentence. Maybe remove one of them?  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * I prefer to keep the actual Oregonian review article as well as the Eater Portland summary of the Oregonian review, if you don't mind. I think the summary is nice, and I based mine on the Eater source. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:35, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , I relocated the ref to the statement that requires it, see if you find it fine.  Gerald WL  05:56, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Sure! Thanks, --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:58, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "few remaining places in Portland offering refillable mimosas..." What do you mean? 👁👄👁  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * Bottomless mimosas are when they keep bringing you drinks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:32, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * "Brix cracked our list of Favorite 5 Sports Bars due to its rarified Pearl Dist" Maybe "Pearl Dis[trict]" and remove the following dot?  Gerald WL  05:05, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 05:33, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Images
All images are relevant, and have appropriate captions, with alt text (I put it), and one has a fair use rationale. We'll wait for a bot to reduce it.  Gerald WL  06:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Overall

 * Does it comply with the Manual of Style?
 * Seems like a Yes to me.
 * Is it written and structured in a neutral fashion?
 * Seems like a Yes to me.
 * Stable?
 * Uh-huh.
 * Broad and focused on the resto?
 * It's all 'bout the resto.
 * Pass or fail?
 * until the image is reduced.  Gerald WL  06:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC)
 * , ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:48, 4 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Annd from there it has passed.  Gerald WL  06:24, 5 December 2020 (UTC)