Talk:Broke (The Office)/GA1

GA Review
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Nice job with the article. I made some changes to the article and here is my comments: I'll put the article on hold so that you can fix this. :) Cheers,  The Le ft orium  13:17, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
 * "Broke" is the twenty-third episode – should be "23rd" since the other numbers in the article aren't spelled out.
 * but Dunder Mifflin offers to buy his company it out
 * as Dunder Mifflin V.P. Charles Miner – spell out "V.P."
 * in the 18-49 age group – use an endash.
 * Add who Steve Martin is (ex. American actor Steve Martin).
 * (See also Bright Lights, Big City by Jay McInerney, whose first chapter is titled, "It's Six A.M. Do You Know Where You Are?") – Is this really necessary here?
 * Link CBS
 * like Charles brown-nosing to David Wallace and realizing Dwight is eccentric
 * The A.V. Club should be italicized
 * Thanks again Leftorium! I think I got them all... —  Hunter  Kahn  ( contribs )  13:26, 17 May 2009 (UTC)
 * Nice, I will pass it now. Congrats on another GA! ;P  The Le ft orium  13:30, 17 May 2009 (UTC)