Talk:Broken Sword: Shadow of the Templars – The Director's Cut/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Retrolord (talk · contribs) 08:50, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

Hi! I'll be taking this review. To start off, i'll do a preliminary review and point out any issues i can find, before moving onto a more formal review with a template. Any questions feel free to ask! Retrolord (talk) 08:50, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

Preliminary points:


 * I've changed the title of the listings section to Awards, as i feel it more accurately describes the contents. feel free to revert if you wish and we can agree on something.


 * The game opens in Paris, a day before the original game's start. Is it neccessary to provide this distinction? The article is not about the original, is this unnecessary?


 * Changed title of plot section to just plot. As this is a seperate article from the original version, i dont think its necessary to keep pointing out this is a remake of the game. Also, is the plot of the entire game listed here? I dont think providing only the remade parts is sufficient detail, could you please include the entire plot? (unless its already there and im being stupid)


 * The plot section ends a bit abruptly, do you think there is a way we can fix this?
 * Better now? --Khanassassin ☪ 18:52, 2 February 2013 (UTC)


 * Could you make clearer throughout the article the references to which character the player is controlling. The article keeps referencing the previous game, and gets a bit confusing.


 * Should there be a citation for the game being available on Google Play part?

Here: was released on Google Play on June 28, 2012. and here: and Google Play.
 * Done. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:52, 2 February 2013 (UTC)


 * I removed the see reception for the original game hyperlink as this is a seperate game and i dont think it is neccessary. We can discuss if this is a problem.
 * Just thought that people could navigate back to the original's reception section to get more in-depth info, but it's cool. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:52, 2 February 2013 (UTC)


 * I merged the part at the end of the reception section into the new awards section.
 * Not sure if lists are "awards", so I though "accolades" would mean awards + lists, but hey. I'm cool with it. --Khanassassin ☪ 18:52, 2 February 2013 (UTC)

Let me know if there are any problems or if you need any help dealing with the issues i've mentioned. Retrolord (talk) 09:04, 2 February 2013 (UTC)


 * I think I've resolved your comments. -Khanassassin ☪ 18:07, 10 February 2013 (UTC)

I'm happy then - PASS Retrolord (talk) 08:20, 11 February 2013 (UTC)