Talk:Broken Sword: The Shadow of the Templars/GA1

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Reviewer: Czarkoff (talk · contribs) 12:51, 14 January 2012 (UTC)

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 * Hi! You have stated link 50 doesn't work. I tryed to open it, and it works....--193.111.221.60 (talk) 14:23, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * At last for me it redirects to the front page. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 14:37, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Double checked. The problem persists. External link checker (see the toolbox at the top of the page) agrees with me, BTW. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 14:39, 14 January 2012 (UTC)

I didn't tag the Plot section, as right now I would have to tag every sentence. Instead I'll wait until it gets at least somehow referenced first. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 14:37, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Just chiming in to say that plot references are typically recommended but not obligatory for VG articles. The issue has been hashed over many a time on the WP:VG talk page, and that's been the consensus. JimmyBlackwing (talk) 07:36, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

I would also note that I didn't really check for WP:MoS issues yet. Same goes for WP:OR check, which is postponed until the issues with the referencing are solved. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 14:42, 14 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Hi! Well, this is the link that should open, because it opens to me.....http://www.slidetoplay.com/story/broken-sword-directors-cut-review..... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 193.111.221.60 (talk) 15:55, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * This one works. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 16:07, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Well, then the source on the article should also work! :) --193.111.221.60 (talk) 16:50, 14 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Oh, and. please help, I don't know how to reduce the size of the Infobox

BTW, "100% Sound blaster compatible audio card" - these 100% are taken from somewhere? &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 10:40, 15 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Hi! I don't how George is not attributed as a fictional character.... I am sorry, I don't say that you're wrong, just that I'm quite new to Wikipedia..... :-) --193.111.221.60 (talk) 20:50, 15 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Now he definitely is. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 22:27, 15 January 2012 (UTC)

Amazing work was done in a fairly short time frame (in Wikipedia terms). Just one issue (1p1) keeps me from passing this article right now. &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 22:44, 15 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Hi again! What I want to say is, that I don't know how to fix the fictionaly atrributed issue.... So, I hope that someone could help me with it, because, like I stated before, this actually my FIRST article I worked on, otherwise I just made small edits.... :) - Oh, plus, I know deleted the "you" out of the quotations in to "players", so now that issue can be marked as Done.... :)--193.111.221.60 (talk) 13:17, 16 January 2012 (UTC)
 * If adding fictional infront of George Stobbart solves the problem, I did it. I will put it on Awaiting, because You're the one who should decide if it's Done. I know this is probably not how it has to be fixed, but I really don't know how to fix it... So can You/Somebody please help me solve this final issue? --193.111.221.60 (talk) 16:57, 16 January 2012 (UTC)

Closing note: I'm very impressed with the responsiveness of the editors. I highly encourage all of you to continue improving other articles and bring them to GA quality level. Please feel free to attach the following barnstar to your user pages:  The Video game Barnstar

For writing high-quality articles and lightning-fast response to the criticism. Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 08:59, 17 January 2012 (UTC) 192.111.221.60, it's a good day for creating Wikipedia account and placing this barnstar to the user page! &mdash; Dmitrij D. Czarkoff (talk) 08:59, 17 January 2012 (UTC)


 * Thank You for your kind review, I did put quite some work into the article. But I'd like to thank You, JimmyBlackwing and everyone who helped me wth the article! --193.111.221.60 (talk) 13:13, 17 January 2012 (UTC)