Talk:Broken Top/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Freikorp (talk · contribs) 09:15, 30 May 2018 (UTC)


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * "Bend and Crook Glaciers are the two named glaciers on the peak" - this strikes me as awkward, would it be better as "There are two named glaciers on the peak, Bend and Crook Glacier"? Up to you though.
 * "making it the second-largest wilderness area in Oregon" - it would be interesting to know what the first is. Can you add it onto the end of this sentence?
 * Rhyodacite is wikilinked, though not at its first mention. Rhyolite could use a wikilink at its first mention too.
 * "overlapping with eruptions at North Sister" - what is North Sister? Same issue with South Sister later on
 * "Edward Taylor's analysis determined" - when did this happen?
 * Memorial Day is wikilinked twice
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. Has an appropriate reference section:
 * Some of your retireval dates are more than 10 years old. It's definitely not a fail point, but I'd update them.
 * B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:
 * B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Looks really good. Placing on hold until minor issues are addressed. Freikorp (talk) 11:30, 30 May 2018 (UTC)

I think your comments have all been addressed! Thanks for the review!  ceran  thor 16:54, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Looks great. Happy to pass now. Congrats. Freikorp (talk) 01:51, 31 May 2018 (UTC)