Talk:Brooklyn Nelson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: UnidentifiedX (talk · contribs) 11:25, 4 June 2022 (UTC)

Hello I will be reviewing the article. Please allow 1-3 days for the assessment to be completed.

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Assessment
 Comprehension:

Verifiability:

Comprehensiveness:

Neutrality:

Stability:

Illustration:



Illustration
One of the main things I immediately noticed is that this article does not contain any images or media. Unfortunately, this is one of the 6 good article criteria. It is widely suggested that a GA classed article contains pictures; if you need any assistance adding one please notify me and I will be hapy to help - UnidentifiedX (talk) 11:46, 4 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Unfortunately, no free images of Nelson are available at the moment; a non-free one would fail WP:NFCC, as Nelson's appearance is not significant in any form. Per the GA criteria, Illustrated, if possible, by media (emphasis mine). Pamzeis (talk) 13:53, 6 June 2022 (UTC)
 * ? Pamzeis (talk) 03:55, 10 June 2022 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the wait. Thanks for your response, totally understandable. I appreciate some articles can't be illustrated by media. I'll continue the assessment shortly. UnidentifiedX (talk) 09:26, 11 June 2022 (UTC)

Early life
- “She has a younger sister” Who?
 * Well, her name is Lacey (according to the refs), but I do not think the readers would benefit much from knowing her name...

- “she appeared in several local productions by First Stage, Curtain Up Players and the Huntington Regional Theater” You could give examples. However I am happy to leave it as it is right now.
 * Well, since The Little Mermaid has already been mentioned, there's only one example I can give, which would seem a little bare in my opinion

- “As of 2018, she lives in New York City with her mother and sister.” As a curious reader, what happened to the dad?
 * He probably stayed West Virginia or something, but no source mentions it...

Responded to your comments Pamzeis (talk) 03:21, 16 June 2022 (UTC)

Hi,. When can I expect more comments? I am fine with waiting for a longer period of time, but I am only asking because it has been over a week since I responded to your previous comments. Thanks. Pamzeis (talk) 04:56, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

? Pamzeis (talk) 08:58, 1 July 2022 (UTC)

I have relisted this article at the nominations page as the reviewer has not responded to my pings, having not edited in over a month. Pamzeis (talk) 06:10, 18 July 2022 (UTC)