Talk:Brooklyn Street Circuit/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 17:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  17:48, 23 June 2018 (UTC)


 * File:New York ePrix street circuit.jpg seems like a better picture of the track layout than the current one, but that's just me.
 * I am 110% sure that image is a copyvio taken off the Formula E website. Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Oh, good point. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  05:23, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * This offers some info on NASCAR in NYC.
 * It also includes environmental and political causes for the Staten Island track not being built.
 * I agree there should be clarification for the downfall of the Staten Island track, although I think it should be brief and more detail(s) should be in a separate article or added to the existing blurb in the International Speedway Corporation. Nonetheless, I will work on it. Tdorante10 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Done and more. Tdorante10 (talk) 11:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "temporary and permanent structures for the race" For example?
 * The example was the guard house. I will clarify. Tdorante10 (talk) 05:14, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. Tdorante10 (talk) 11:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * "Bird won the second race of the weekend on July 16. After July 16, the track was taken apart." Merge the two sentences.
 * Done. Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * A small mention of previous races in the lead would be nice.
 * Previous races in the New York area, or previous Formula E races? Tdorante10 (talk) 04:50, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * The former, the latter hasn't happened yet. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  05:23, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Done. Tdorante10 (talk) 11:27, 24 June 2018 (UTC)

Almost perfect article. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  04:38, 24 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the review, and thank you,, for stepping in and fixing these minor issues. (I had almost forgotten I had this at GAN; it's been so long!) --Bcschneider53 (talk) 11:30, 24 June 2018 (UTC)