Talk:Brookmans Park

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History
Had a go to rewrite the history, it was mostly unsourced, but for those that are interested and want to improve the article there is also this source Govvy (talk) 13:16, 20 July 2019 (UTC)

Govvy I have been improving this Brookmans Park page and you will have noticed that the citations have increased from 13 to 22 (plus one other Wikipedia Page and one IMDb reference [my rookie mistakes]) plus over 20 links to other wikipedia pages so I believe the quality of the page has been improved.

The section on notable people was all researched from independent references and other wikipedia pages mentioning Brookmans Park (I don't know how to reference that or if it is just a reverse pointer).

Even after my efforts it still needs more editing and references to improve it, so it was work in progress. But in 5 minutes you have undone 10 hours of careful work. I am willing to work with you, so let me know what else I have done wrong? So we can make it better together. RobThinks (talk) 22:00, 20 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Didn't mean to be so brutal, but wikipedia can be strict on what citations can be used per, even I don't know it all, there is a lot at WP:RS, WP:RSP to read and remember. Govvy (talk) 13:09, 27 May 2020 (UTC)

Structure of page
It appears to me that Gobions Open Space is mainly history - I plan to move it to after Miss Moffet.

I welcome any group main title (maybe Institutations) but I look forward to your suggestions. Thanks RobThinks (talk) 21:20, 26 May 2020 (UTC)

Removal of Article has multiple issues - at top of page
I believe these two issues have been verified, so if there are no objections I plan to remove them soon. RobThinks (talk) 22:42, 23 June 2020 (UTC) :
 * 1) This article needs additional citations for verification.
 * 2) This article includes a list of references, but its sources remain unclear because it has insufficient inline citations.