Talk:Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 22:56, 17 November 2016 (UTC)

I'll do this one - expect a review tomorrow or during the weekend.--IDVtalk 22:56, 17 November 2016 (UTC)

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 * an in-game reference to Prompto's difficult childhood - We haven't introduced Prompto yet, so I would write "to the character Prompto's...."
 * alongside fellow spin-off title Kingsglaive: Final Fantasy XV - I would probably specify that this is a film and not another ONA
 * Genres must reference a RS and not be our own interpretations.
 * Opinions on the anime [...] were among the most watched videos - the ONA was what was among the most-watched, while this seems to say that reviews of the ONA were watched a lot

Synopsis

 * Is this crystal just a regular real-world crystal or is it some magical item? I don't understand its significance.

Production

 * Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV forms part of the "Final Fantasy XV Universe" (...) that includes Brotherhood - don't list Brotherhood twice
 * Link CGI to Computer-generated imagery
 * Is it relevant at all in this context that XV used to be called Versus XIII?
 * We should probably clarify how Square Enix is related to XV.
 * The concept was first proposed some time in 2014 "some time" doesn't add anything to this
 * Link tech demo to Technology demonstration
 * after his near-death experience - the use of "his" makes it sound like the reader is meant to know what event this is referring to. I would probably change it to "a near-death experience"

Release

 * "Uncovered: Final Fantasy XV", a media event dedicated to the title Does "the title" refer to Brotherhood or XV?
 * The two formed a close bond, - does "the two" refer to Noctis and Iris or Noctis and Gladiolus?
 * beaten back - during - use – or — rather than -.

Reception

 * GamesRadar called the anime "surprisingly well-written and are well worth watching" - this doesn't work grammatically. I would probably write "called the episodes" or change "and are" to "[and]".
 * Is PSX Extreme a reliable source? It hasn't been discussed much at the WPVG sources talk page, so unless we have reason to believe it is reliable, I would just remove it, especially considering the only thing it says about Brotherhood is that it is "excellent".

Comments
Looks good - I did find a few issues, listed above, but I don't think any of them should be very difficult to fix.--IDVtalk 16:37, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I've sorted everything above. --ProtoDrake (talk) 16:52, 19 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Excellent! Brotherhood: Final Fantasy XV is now a GA.--IDVtalk 17:00, 19 November 2016 (UTC)