Talk:Brown Grand Theatre

Notes from IvoShandor
A few comments.


 * Could use some sectioning. Follow the guidelines at WP:LEAD when composing the article intro.
 * The Kansas State Historic Preservation Office may have the National Register Nomination Form available online or by request, poke around on their website, these are usually pretty good sources.
 * While external linking is one way to do citations it is probably the least preferred way on Wikipedia, would suggest another method, inlines would probably work well, since that is essentially what the external jumps are working as.
 * This sentence: Renaissance in style and overall design, the $40,000 structure became a priceless jewel amid rare aesthetic fiches in a small town in turn of the century mid-America.
 * Needs some NPOV work, priceless jewel according to whom? Usually there are good NPOV ways to describe the architecture.

That's it for now, I may make a few tweaks, you may need to do some restructuring when you put in some sections. Btw, your peer review request isn't complete above. IvoShandor 07:45, 15 June 2007 (UTC)

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