Talk:Brownsea Castle/GA1

GA Review
The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 15:11, 30 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Sorry for the delay, changes made as per below. Cheers! Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)


 * One DAB, external links good.
 * Still have DAB to greenhouse.
 * Done. Hchc2009 (talk) 18:40, 11 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * it was in a very poor condition This maybe a Britishism, but "a" very poor condition reads oddly to me.
 * I think it is BritEng thing - I've done a quick Google, and it's not just me! ;)


 * 4 feet (1.2 m) high Remember how to format the template for the adjectival form from my last review of yours?
 * Adj=on should now be applied. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
 * It's a little more complicated than that. Use 4 ft as a model, substituting high for long, etc., as needed. I did one of them already to make sure that it works. Don't forget to delete the extra adjective that will follow from your original phrasing.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:22, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Done. I don't think "across" needs it... Hchc2009 (talk) 18:40, 11 August 2015 (UTC)


 * the ferrying rits in 1581 typo, I think.
 * Yup, fixed. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)


 * What's the connection between Charles Sturt and the Napoleonic Wars?
 * I've clarified a bit more, but the source was unclear about what he was actually doing in it. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Is it Jacobethean or Jacobean? I've seen the latter, but never the former.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:13, 1 August 2015 (UTC)
 * It should be Jacobethan (I can't see Jacobethean) - the wikilink gives some more background on it. It refers to a mock form of Jacobean. Hchc2009 (talk) 16:34, 11 August 2015 (UTC)
 * OK, I guess that I should have pursued the link a bit more diligently.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 17:22, 11 August 2015 (UTC)