Talk:Brummer-class cruiser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 17:26, 7 October 2011 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * Shouldn't Ol-Marine be Öl-Marine? Couple instances of she vs. they in armament section. Brummer class cruiser should have Brummer-class hyphenated.
 * Should all be fixed. Novik doesn't use umlauts so I just followed that. Parsecboy (talk) 10:40, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * Link boilers, presumably water tube.
 * Don't forget this.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 13:43, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Oops, thanks for catching that. Parsecboy (talk) 13:56, 9 October 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * No picture or drawing is available?
 * File:Brummer class line drawing.jpg should be fine with fair use (and is probably PD anyway - Novik states it's a reproduction of a contemporary illustration. Parsecboy (talk) 10:40, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * No picture or drawing is available?
 * File:Brummer class line drawing.jpg should be fine with fair use (and is probably PD anyway - Novik states it's a reproduction of a contemporary illustration. Parsecboy (talk) 10:40, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail: