Talk:Brunei at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DatGuy (talk · contribs) 11:45, 18 February 2017 (UTC)

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 * Great job on this one. Dat GuyTalkContribs 13:38, 18 February 2017 (UTC)

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Discussion
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 * Second review! Dat GuyTalkContribs 11:45, 18 February 2017 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review . I have taken action on the above points where appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 07:01, 19 February 2017 (UTC)

Additional comments (as the second opinion):

From:Brunei, officially as Brunei Darussalam,

To: Brunei, officially known as Brunei Darussalam,
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

I'll leave this between you two, but it is known as track and field pretty much only in the United States. Otherwise it is known as athletics.
 * Changed to athletics. MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

The punctuation in this sentence is not correct: The Brunei delegation included two track and field athletes: Ak Hafiy Tajuddin Rositi and Maziah Mahusin, and one swimmer, Anderson Lim.
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Typo here: Mahusin was the flag bearer for the opening ceremonywhile
 * Fixed MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Is this sentence relevant for the background?: Brunei competed in the London Summer Games from 27 July to 12 August 2012
 * I believe it to be so. MWright96 (talk) 19:48, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

Capitalize games: qualified for the games
 * ✅ MWright96 (talk) 19:49, 24 February 2017 (UTC)

All the other criteria seem to be met.
 * May I ask if there are any other issues that need to be rectified? MWright96 (talk) 19:51, 24 February 2017 (UTC)
 * I am good, you can ask if he has anything else. Kees08 (talk) 19:54, 24 February 2017 (UTC)