Talk:Brunei at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 00:46, 21 July 2017 (UTC)

"Brunei failed to register any athletes in two editions of the Games: 1992 in Barcelona and 2008 in Beijing." What of Brunei and the Olympics before 1988 though? Any reasons for why they didn't enter, beyond just not qualifying?
 * Well, their first appearance was in 1998. The article says it at the start of the section.

"Brunei, however, has yet to win its first ever Olympic medal." I think this would sound better more concurrent to the article, i.e. Brunei failed to medal here in 2016; still waiting for its first overall.
 * Looks good?

"...it was only represented by one official." So if the Bruneian didn't compete, what did he do?
 * Honestly, not sure.

"...but was excluded on the day of the opening ceremony after failing to register any athletes." Up until then Brunei thought it would qualify?
 * Brunei could have, and would have participated if they wanted to. The Ministry of Culture, Youth and Sports issued a press release stating that their decision not to participate was due to an injury to one of their athletes. Should I add that?

"Brunei received universality slots..." Maybe could you provide a brief definition of this term
 * Universality is another term for wildcard, which is explained in the background section.

"Brunei received an invitation from the Tripartite Commission..." Perhaps a definition of the Commission as well
 * Looks good?

All in all a tight, well done article. Nice work! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 00:46, 21 July 2017 (UTC)\


 * Yes, does look very good! Ready to go...QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:21, 3 August 2017 (UTC)