Talk:Bruno Manser/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 21:50, 8 August 2015 (UTC)

This article needs some reshaping, some issues are listed below: I'd normally quickfail this, but I'm giving you seven days to fix these issues, as part of "assuming good faith"--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 22:01, 8 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Written like an essay.❌
 * Too many cleanup tags.❌
 * Paragraphs are too short.❌
 * Lead is too short.❌
 * Some facts lack citations.❌
 * Numbers less then nine are represented with words.✅
 * "Possible explanations" section sounds unusual and is unecessary✅
 * Thanks for taking time to review this article. I have done some changes as per the recommendations. However, the article cannot be further expanded because the book "Bruno Manser:The Inside Story" is not available. I would accept a quickfail for this because the paragraphs are too short. However, would you point out the exact sentences that requires further citations? Thanks. I will nominate the article for peer review first before I nominate it again for GA review in the future.Cerevisae (talk) 23:35, 8 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Failed, and noted with "citation needed" tags.--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:48, 8 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Issues with criteria below:
 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 23:21, 8 August 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail: