Talk:Bryan Ferry/to do


 * Find more copyright-free images of Bryan Ferry.
 * "Before Roxy Music (before 1971)" is stubby and the prose is choppy.
 * The lead needs some expansion per WP:LEAD to summarize the article.
 * The way "Early Roxy Music (1971-1976)" is written is more about Ferry's relationships that about his music!
 * "Following his split from Lucy, British newspapers photographed Ferry with Katie Turner, 35 years younger than Ferry, naming her as his new 'girlfriend'.[18][19][20][21]" Maybe you should think about merging these notes as I did in El Greco or Sandy did in Tourette Syndrome.
 * Get rid of the "See also" section incorporating its only link into the main text, if you think this link is necessary.
 * I see no analysis or critical approach of Ferry's music, just an exposition (detailed indeed) of his career and albums, but this is not enough.
 * You could also think about including samples of songs of him in the article as I have seen in other music-related articles.--Yannismarou (talk) 16:05, 18 December 2007 (UTC)