Talk:Bryan Steil

Reads like ad
This article reads more like an ad for the person to me instead of a neutral description of the person. I think that this might need to be rewritten from a neutral standpoint.

216.138.61.221 (talk) 06:27, 28 October 2019 (UTC)

I agree...it's like a PR team put it together. SocialistWithAComputer (talk) 02:06, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Thirded. IP addresses in the 2601 range seem responsible for most of it. I'll try to get to it within the next week or so.  Willsome 4 29  (say hey or see my edits!) 03:54, 10 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Barely hit it within a week but I have given the article a significant copyedit.  Willsome 4 29  (say hey or see my edits!) 01:31, 18 April 2020 (UTC)