Talk:Buangkok MRT station/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 04:08, 12 April 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 17:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 17:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)


 * @ZKang123 Here are my comments! Hope they can be addressed. Arconning (talk) 16:02, 27 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Responded.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * @ZKang123 Just one more issue, the title of the artwork is "Water, Nature & Contemporary". The lead says "Water, Nature and the Contemporary" Arconning (talk) 06:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Fixed.--ZKang123 (talk) 06:37, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Prose and MoS

 * Capitalize Line in mentions of North East line.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * The station will also serve an upcoming integrated development Sengkang Grand Residencies and a future bus interchange., add commas after development and Residencies.
 * Fixed.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Civil Defence shelter, add comma at the end.
 * Fixed.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * An Art-in-Transit artwork Water, Nature and the Contemporary by Vincent Leow is displayed at this station., An Art-in-Transit artwork by Vincent Leow, Water, Nature & Contemporary, is displayed at this station.
 * Fixed. (at this point I note your love for commas though. Personally I don't really like overusing, but sure.) --ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Constructions

 * re-developed, remove hyphen.

Delay in opening

 * – Woodleigh and Buangkok –, replace endashes with emdashes and remove the spaces.
 * Personally stylistically I'm keeping them as endashes.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * "commercially viable",, remove comma.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Lee quipped, add that at the end.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

White elephant incidents and station opening

 * without issues., replace issues with either issue or any issues.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)

Details

 * 5:45 am to 12:25 am, turn am to a.m..
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * road of Sengkang Central, add comma at the end.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * and two schools, add colon at the end.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Civil Defence (CD) shelter:, replace colon with semicolon.

Artwork

 * commentary of life, replace of with on.
 * Done.--ZKang123 (talk) 00:47, 28 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Optional. fishes to fish.

Images

 * Images have proper licenses and are relevant to the article.

Refs

 * I would suggest linking the references without links, though a source is a source. Pass.
 * Random source check: References 2, 15, and 30, are okay.
 * Reference 44 has moved to a new location. Information is not on the current website provided.
 * Earwig's fine, manual check same. Pass.

Misc

 * No ongoing edit war, focused and broad information about the topic, neutral.