Talk:Bubbles (video game)/GA1

GA Review
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
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 * Pass or Fail:
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Alright, after reviewing this article it's pretty solid and informative, but there's one thing holding me up on it: the prose. The way some sentences are feels too choppy, especially in the lead and even development and reception sections, making the article somewhat difficult to wade through. A light copyedit will probably solve the issue, it just needs it to flow better. Other than that no complaints about the article: it's another informative piece by you, which is always a good read.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 05:46, 1 July 2009 (UTC)
 * I gave it a copy edit sweep, but admittedly I didn't change much. If that didn't address your concern, I can try to get some one else to give it a look. (Guyinblack25 talk 15:05, 1 July 2009 (UTC))
 * Alright we look good to go, passing now.--Kung Fu Man (talk) 17:13, 1 July 2009 (UTC)