Talk:Bubsy in Fractured Furry Tales/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cukie Gherkin (talk · contribs) 17:10, 14 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
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 * Pass/fail:

Lead


 * 1) I'd recommend mentioning the release dates (especially since "1994 video game" doesn't apply to the European version).
 * ✅ -- Roberth Martinez (talk) 22:23, 16 June 2023 (UTC)

Infobox

Gameplay


 * 1) Is there a source to say that the returning elements were in a previous entry?
 * Changed the sentence. Roberth Martinez (talk) 21:51, 19 June 2023 (UTC)

Development and release


 * 1) Is Jaguar Sector a reliable source?
 * 2) Is FPToday a reliable source? Can you find the relevant press release on a more reliable source if not?
 * I would classify both Jaguar Sector II and Nine Lives as situational sources; Jaguar Sector II was a website similar to Planet Virtual Boy, dedicated to the Atari Jaguar, where they had their own databases for games and their release dates, while Nine Lives is a repostory for press releases related to games on the Atari Jaguar. (P.S. I vaguely remember that the release dates from Jaguar Sector II came both from press releases and magazines, not pure speculation...) Roberth Martinez (talk) 20:48, 18 June 2023 (UTC)


 * 1) Just to double check since I don't wanna have to translate the text, who, if any, does the March 1995 issue of Maniac confirm worked on the game?
 * I can positively say that Maniac magazine does indeed says who worked on the game at the top on the game's name in the review. I translated that text via Google Translate - Producer: Faran Thomason • Programmers: Andrew Seed • Graphics: David Severn, Steve Noake • Sound: Alastair Lindsey, Kevin Saville • Design: Jody Cobb. Roberth Martinez (talk) 15:33, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Okay, great. I wasn't doubting it, I just didn't want to have to do the work, haha. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 17:31, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Ah, i see you cheeky little gremlin XD (P.S. so, is there anything else left to be done?) Roberth Martinez (talk) 18:47, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I just need to check the Reception section and it should be good. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 19:02, 20 June 2023 (UTC)
 * OK, so i went ahead and did some last-minute work in the reception section. Roberth Martinez (talk) 23:02, 21 June 2023 (UTC)

Images


 * 1) Fair use rationale for screenshot has missing fields, and the purpose of use should argue a more specific purpose if possible.
 * ✅ -- I added additional information into the gameplay image file . Roberth Martinez (talk) 22:13, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
 * I addressed the points raised. If there's anything necessary left to be done then, let me know! Roberth Martinez (talk) 22:23, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Yeah, I was gonna work on it more, but I got a migraine so I needed to rest my poor head. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 22:24, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Oh OK. Try to get well. I will wait for more comments! Roberth Martinez (talk) 22:40, 16 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the delay, Reception looks solid. Passed. - Cukie Gherkin (talk) 06:31, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Don't worry about thae delay! Thanks for reviewing the article :D (P.S. - I also have this game on standby for GA review [Baldies] so if you're interested in doing the GA review for that one then, let me know!) Roberth Martinez (talk) 16:59, 23 June 2023 (UTC)